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Fly, man

Fly, man

As you buzz around the room, all I notice is your energy

The Never ending power that is not fearful of jeopardy

You own the room, simple as a piece of pie

You are 100% truly better than I

 

Short lived, but full of excitement

You filled my life with enticement

Although a bad listener, you’re a brilliant spy

You are 100% truly better than I

 

Always trying hard to escape our clutches

Never realizing we’re the ones in crutches

We don’t know how to help you reach the sky

You are 100% truly better than I

 

This is your time, don’t let it go

There is so little of it, go with the flow

I won’t let you escape my eye

You are 100% truly better than I

 

 

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Jodie Paterson

I’m Jodie Paterson, a 23 year old Edinburgh based blogger who is passionate about blogging, writing, social media and photography. Currently studying Events Management at University, blogging still remains a large hobby of mine.

4 Comments

    • October 12, 2014 / 1:18 AM

      Thank you so much! Do you mind if I ask why?

  1. October 12, 2014 / 1:24 AM

    I like the repetition of the last line and it’s a little bit whimsical and playful.

    I really like the line “you own the room, simple as a piece of pie”.

    • October 12, 2014 / 1:26 AM

      Thank you very much for your feedback 🙂

      I really like that line too, it’s my favourite

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